First Chapter Of My Story?

It's great! Only a few errors like how I think the paragraphs should be indented and in paragraph 6 sentence 4, I think it should be toe not two. But it is your first drafts so small mistakes like that are okay, besides what are editors for? Haha.

Isn't not paying off the Debt a brilliant tactical maneuver? It'll split the Republican Party in two?

What's really going to be the pisser is Obama won't get his increase of the debt level and he will not be able to increase his entitlement programs to keep people enslaved to the government! No more borrowing and that will piss the Democrats off bigtime!

In Percy Jackson what is the magic used in the Lotus Hotel?

In the movie it showed me, Annabeth and Grover eating the Lotus flower and they put us in a trance and we didn't leave the hotel for days as we were trapped. In the book we didn't eat anything (I may have ate at the cafes and Grover from the fridge) but still got put into a trance and it seemed to come from the games or activities themselves. Does anyone know what magic this is? I'm asking this because I think Rick is using it in the books. I can't get away from them...It's like I'm in a trance!

What are your thoughts on firebaggers?

Most of the firedoglake criticisms of Obama are reasonable but there certainly may be some PUMA-types (disgruntled Hillary Clinton supporters who still can't get over it) who just flat-out hate Obama. But it's mostly good, their take on how Obama mishandled Gulf of Mexico drilling and the resulting explosion and spill by BP was spot on.

Aside from wins, which 300-win pitcher is the best?

Of this list, I would have to go with Warren Spahn. It's certainly not Nolan Ryan, one of the most overrated pitchers of all time, despite what Don Antonio and some others think. Interestingly, there are four non-HOF pitchers on this list-Glavine, Johnson, Maddux and Clemens. Depending on the voters, Roger Clemens may become the only member of the 300 win club not to be enshrined in Cooperstown.

How do i make my hair like matt barnes?

my hair is like this http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2632/img00385201102041444.jpg. but i want it to look like matt barnes of the los angeles lakers. just like this http://cdn.necolebitchie.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/matt-barnes-21.jpg. CAN SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME OUT??

What do you think of my list of the 10 greatest presidents?

It's all a matter of opinion of course but I would not have Grant anywhere near that list and JFK would have to go as well. Jefferson and Madison would be added.